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Eerie's Night

June 3, 2010
By Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
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Katie_Grey DIAMOND, Leipsic, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Difficult is not impossible - Relient K, &quot;Hope for Every Fallen Man&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> If all I had was love, would I still be lovely?<br /> If all I gave was love, would you give up on me?<br /> -House of Heroes, &quot;Love is for the Middle Class&quot;

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Shadow's downcast on Eerie's night,
the stars smiling frightfully upon it-
Crisp, the air she breathes smells of warmth,
softly embracing her luminescent skin-
Crack! The light rolls through her eyes,
the thunder her melody of choice-
so she sings,
circling the horizon she takes
the attention of all living-
leaving them to wonder in the midst of mystery
with gaping eyes and pounding hearts-
Sleep is for no man
on Eerie's night.

The author's comments:
I like to leave them wondering.
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aquarius SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 12:39 pm
aquarius SILVER, Lancaster, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;unwelcome truths are not popular.&quot;

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Wow. I really can't say much else besides that. This is definitely one of the better poems that I've read lately. It was hidden and beautiful. I congratulate you for pulling off such a balance between the mysterious and the revealed. [: Please do write more; I will try to stay posted!

Enjoy five, much-earned stars from moi! 

SarClark BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 11:37 am
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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WOW! This is really good and I agree with Myworld.
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 10:03 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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Btw, please write more poems!! I'll be watchin out..
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 10:03 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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I can't believe no one has posted on this article yet, but at least I will....I absolutely loooove this! Like you, I like poems and/or stories that leaves a sense of mystery behind, and something that keeps your mind wondering, trying to unearth  the real meaning of it.