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Looking for away out

June 10, 2010
By LoveKills GOLD, Niantic, Connecticut
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And people say we wear tight jeans and dye our hair. That doesnt mean we can't scream or make loud noise.

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Stuck in thoughts that i dont get
just keeps goin'
never stops
no end
there is too much in my head
cant stand it
it hurts
to much
My thoughts fill even more
over my head
cant stand it
again
i dont know where it leads
i am lost
thoughts are stronge
my body is weak
i am just lookin' for away out
no windows
no doors
no light
there i lay still with thougts
gothic darkness
no sound
all fear

© Kristine B., Setauket, NY

The author's comments:
another night i couldnt sleep. i had all theses thoughts in my head and that poem was one of them.
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