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Invisible Girl

July 1, 2010
By TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
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TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
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Favorite Quote:
I can picture in my mind a world without war, a world without hate. And I can picture us attacking that world because they&#039;d never expect it. <br /> <br /> -Jack Handey-

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I'm the girl you see alone
The one who watches
But never ventures to say hello
The girl with no friends
I'm the girl who never has fun at parties
Because I'm standing in the corner
The invisible girl
The girl who's name you forgot
My smile is shy and scarce
You think I'm a freak
I'm an outcast
The girl who stands alone
If you only got to know me
You would realize
I have feelings and dreams
I have things I love and things I hate
I've fallen in love and had my heart broken
Without ever saying a word
I've watched the crowds go by
They never stopped to look at me
They never said hello
They just looked at me, then turned away
Leaving me standing alone
Trying so hard to not let the pain in
Pretending I don't care
Watching you carefully, hopefully
Wishing you would glance over
But you never do
I pretend I don't care, though I do
I know I'm an invisible girl

The author's comments:
This piece was written (sadly) on my experiences in life. I think this kinda applies to everyone though. Inside all of us is an fear of slipping into the unknown and never getting out of that zone. That's what this poem's about.
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This article has 11 comments.

DaydreamBeliever GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 7:43 pm
DaydreamBeliever GOLD, Lockport, Other
15 articles 4 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you live to be one hundred, I want to live to be one hundred minus one day, so that I&#039;ll never have to live without you. -Winnie the Pooh

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very beautiful and inspiring :) its so simple but when you finish reading it... you realize how beautiful it is :)
TheEvilGenius BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 10:03 pm
TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can picture in my mind a world without war, a world without hate. And I can picture us attacking that world because they&#039;d never expect it. <br /> <br /> -Jack Handey-

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Probably not... XP  Mine will probably be all blurry and horrid... >_>
Thorn73 said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 8:37 pm
Thorn73, Hamilton, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay back, human. You don&#039;t know what you&#039;re dealing with.&quot;<br /> -Holly Short (Artemis Fowl series)

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Thank you, and I'm sure that yours will be infinitely better! :P
TheEvilGenius BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 6:08 pm
TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can picture in my mind a world without war, a world without hate. And I can picture us attacking that world because they&#039;d never expect it. <br /> <br /> -Jack Handey-

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Welllll.... I doubt they'll be any good....but I suppose I could still take a few and submit them! ;)  And congrats on your's by the way, they're super cool.  ^.^
Thorn73 said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 5:26 pm
Thorn73, Hamilton, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay back, human. You don&#039;t know what you&#039;re dealing with.&quot;<br /> -Holly Short (Artemis Fowl series)

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Definitely! I'd like to see them! *Finally managed to get her photographs published, and feels very smug about it.*
TheEvilGenius BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 5:15 pm
TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can picture in my mind a world without war, a world without hate. And I can picture us attacking that world because they&#039;d never expect it. <br /> <br /> -Jack Handey-

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Cool! :D  I should submit some photographs! ^_^ 
Thorn73 said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 3:57 pm
Thorn73, Hamilton, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay back, human. You don&#039;t know what you&#039;re dealing with.&quot;<br /> -Holly Short (Artemis Fowl series)

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Um...."A Letter To Myself", as well as a few other poems and photographs...:P
TheEvilGenius BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 3:28 pm
TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can picture in my mind a world without war, a world without hate. And I can picture us attacking that world because they&#039;d never expect it. <br /> <br /> -Jack Handey-

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Oh, okay! :)  What did you submit?
Thorn73 said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:48 pm
Thorn73, Hamilton, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay back, human. You don&#039;t know what you&#039;re dealing with.&quot;<br /> -Holly Short (Artemis Fowl series)

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Oh, I have posted already: I'm simply waiting for my work to be scanned by the lovely people who are resonsible for this magazine! ^.^
TheEvilGenius BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 4:05 pm
TheEvilGenius BRONZE, Santa Barbara, California
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can picture in my mind a world without war, a world without hate. And I can picture us attacking that world because they&#039;d never expect it. <br /> <br /> -Jack Handey-

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Thanks, Eva-chan!!! :D  So when are you going to post something? XD
Thorn73 said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:56 pm
Thorn73, Hamilton, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stay back, human. You don&#039;t know what you&#039;re dealing with.&quot;<br /> -Holly Short (Artemis Fowl series)

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This piece is beautiful, and very poignant. It speaks to me, and is easily relatable. I also loved the flow and rhythm which you display! Good job! ^.^