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July 6, 2010
By skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
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skatergirl13 PLATINUM, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
" your heart is the most valuable thing I have I don't want to lose it"

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I waited and waited
I finally had you with me
I've loved you for so long
but now I don't
You hurt me
so now I'm done
so you might as well just leave
because I'm not coming back
If you want me
then come get me
prove you want to be with me
I was happy
but now I'm not
Now I'm saying goodbye

© Felicia R., Arlington Heights, IL

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Hannahgee6 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:59 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.<br /> -jesus

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GREAT JOB!!!! :) iI absolutly LOVE this. 

plz look at my work...iI kinda neeD some feeDback. 

erikae GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:26 pm
erikae GOLD, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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I can totally relate to this. Its beautiful. Great job. :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:09 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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I lvoe this its so emotional!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!