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July 6, 2010
By ForeverFaith PLATINUM, Dansville, New York
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ForeverFaith PLATINUM, Dansville, New York
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"so this is how liberty dies, with a thunderous applause" -unknown

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Remember when life was simple
we were ignorant and young
protected from the truth
now i see clouds of gray where there used to be blue and pink
fluffy like cotton candy
it was only a reflection of my imagination

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this peice reflects my feelings on how simple my life used to be before i grew up and found out that nothing is the way it seemed
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crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:12 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Omg ive so felt this way sometimes!! This is so relatable!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!