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Defeated

July 7, 2010
By Rea_124 PLATINUM, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Rea_124 PLATINUM, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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There is a line between having the humilty to ask for help and being dependent on others.

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My story lay in visuals
Visual regrets of the weakness i am
Each sight is a slap in the face
Reminding me of the me of the pains ive felt
This pain though i cannot feel it now
As they lay marked on my skin
Telling the journey of one small girl
Fighting to be strong
Fighting to hold on 
Fighting fighting fighting
...defeated

© Rosalie P., Pompton Plains, NJ

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Rea_124 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 4:18 pm
Rea_124 PLATINUM, New Berlin, Wisconsin
23 articles 0 photos 3 comments

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There is a line between having the humilty to ask for help and being dependent on others.

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thank you. i have been writing for a long time now :)
poetry101 said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 4:15 pm
whoa you're good.