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Your Name & My Heart

July 8, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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A new road is being paved
In the city of my thoughts
And your name is on the street sign.

I can't keep myself away,
The street seems to call my name.
I pace the pavement endlessly.

Why in this sprawling network of roads,
On the paths where my pondering takes place,
Do I always end up back here?

After an impossible amount of time
Admiring the appealing avenue -
I buy myself a house at the corner of Your Name & My Heart <3

© Kaitlyn S., Milford, CT

The author's comments:
I tried to use a lot of alliterations, metaphors, and personification. This was a really fun concept I just HAD to turn into a poem - Lemme know what you think!
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Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:24 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Aw thanks I'm really glad you liked this one :)
Hazel-daisy GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 7:24 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck<br /> <br /> In three words i can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost<br /> <br /> Live, Love, Laugh - ______<br /> <br /> Hope, Love, breathe &lt;3 - Me

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i love it and i feel the same way, my favourite line was ''In the city of my thoughts'' i like that metaphor...its good! great work, once again! :)
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 1:20 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Thanks. I'm glad that this mean something to you :)
Olajide BRONZE said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 9:47 pm
Olajide BRONZE, Lanham, Maryland
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i never regret one bit checking out this poem. However simple a poem might be, some tend to hold a high variety of complex meanings/diverse. I think this particular poem constitute such vibrant values. Nice work.
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 6:13 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Thanks so much!! :)
QuixoticDreamer SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 5:12 pm
QuixoticDreamer SILVER, Birnamwood, Wisconsin
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Food for thought requires a mind with teeth. -The Two Princesses of Bamarre

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Its very simplicity is appealing. Five stars!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:10 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Thank you SO much... :)
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 7:40 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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this one is probably your best work ;D (only probably because i still have about three more to go).  but i cant see how much better it can get.  this is AMAZING!
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:02 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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wow! this, like all your other poems, are FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! I love your wording and I love love love the concept! Please write more!!!!!!! more more more!!!!
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 7:49 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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i think that this is great and there is plenty of boom.dont let the RUDE and UNNESSASSARY  words of others bring you  down. You are a great writer and will go far in your WRITING life. this poem is by far one of the best ive read on teenink adn im not just saying that adn your others ALL make my top twenty i would say ten but there are way more than ten!! so again that gird doesnt  know what she is talking about . love it@@
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 5:45 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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very nice struture but i feel there's nothing dats gonna pull me in as a reader.sorry the details are great but aint like boom or get my attention.