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August 17, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

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Frozen.
No way to move.
You dont want to.
Nothing could change.
We couldn't be more than we were.
Like an ice cube that can't melt.
Were frozen.

Frozen.
No where to go.
Nothing more than a hug.
When I tried to move
You zapped me with ice.
Like an ice cube that can't melt.
Were frozen.

© Barbara S., Hoffman Estates, IL

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I was sitting at my desk in my room and this just came to me.You should see the piece of paper i wrote it on! its a mess!! let me know what you think!!
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 4:53 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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will do will do!!! thansk again!
bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 11:21 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

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lol! THATS SO IRONIC! well..she must b so proud=) keep it up n di wish i was a gr9 writing like u. ill b putting up work after i write this comment so keep checking in 4 my work=)
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 6:33 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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well thanks!!!!! my mom is an english teacherso... you know!!
bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 10:28 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

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its amaing once again! keep it up yo! my eng teach would love u if u were his student=)