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God Can You Hear Me?

September 19, 2010
By Tayisrael BRONZE, Victoria, Minnesota
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God Can You Hear Me?
Can you hear me?
I’m falling.
Faster than I could ever imagine.
They tell me about you
On the deepest days they tell me I need you.
I come crawling to you.
I fall. Fall more than ever.
I’m lost. I need you.
I need your love.
I want you to be with me.
I need you in me.
I want you to have plans for me.
Falling, you catch me.
You bring me to the light.
You love me. You live in me.
I’m ready to move.
I’m ready to be more like you.
Hold on. Don’t let go.
Teach me. Show me.
I’m ready.
God can you hear me?

© Dawn Grace R., Barrigada, Guam

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Delliebug BRONZE said...
on Jun. 8 2011 at 8:20 pm
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I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me- Philippians 4:13

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I love ur message....stay bless...<3