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Your Eyes

October 13, 2010
By TheGraeWolf GOLD, Pikeville, North Carolina
TheGraeWolf GOLD, Pikeville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Forget it and move forward, this is a New Era"


I sit there staring
into a wild blue ocean
pretty soon I'm falling
into it
Many consider it
cold, painful, full of despair
All I see is
a vast world
full of
random creatures,
sporadic tides,
and the insane gulls
flying overhead

They laugh at me
as I float along
hopelessly lost
in this sea
but to me,
there's nothing better

Occasionally an empty island
appears in the distance
a solid pinnacle
in this watery world

The waves crashing
on the shore
soothe me as
I wash up on
the beach

And as I wake on the sand,
I look around
and realize I'm
alone,
So I jump
back into
the wild blue
sea,
to float
in bliss,
until you
look away
again



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on Dec. 7 2010 at 12:00 pm
TheGraeWolf GOLD, Pikeville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Forget it and move forward, this is a New Era"

Now why would you want people to know that? ;P

on Nov. 20 2010 at 6:02 pm
RedheadAtHeart ELITE, Mountain Home, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Love with open hands. - Madeleine L'Engle

Oh, and I just want everyone to know that these are my eyes.

on Oct. 28 2010 at 10:00 pm
RedheadAtHeart ELITE, Mountain Home, Idaho
109 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love with open hands. - Madeleine L'Engle

You can't help but love beautiful work like this. My favorite part is where you wake on the sand and realize you're alone. From there to the end.