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Small Blessings

October 19, 2010
By WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
WinterFairy PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
45 articles 15 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t dream it. Be it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Singing is praying twice, and dancing is singing with the body.&quot;<br /> &quot;Paper is more patient than man.&quot;<br /> &quot;Where you live shouldn&#039;t determine whether you live&quot;


Tolerance
Is a small blessing
I need it for who I live with

Silence
Is a small blessing
I don't want him to hear me cry out

Obedience
Is a small blessing
I have to do what he says

Pain
Is a small blessing
I have to know I'm still alive


The author's comments:
I think this could be broken down into a few facets, but what I'm really trying to focus on is Muslims (with no offense intended!!). I saw on the news that in Afghanistan (?) it was made legal for men to beat women as long as there were no physical marks. I saw that and thought it was terrible. This is supposed to be about a teenage girl who gets beaten by her father over there, but like I said, it could be interpreted different ways. (And like I said, I'm not trying to encourage prejudice against Muslims, but this is just how I feel about that law. I know not all Muslim men beat women, but making it legal?? Come one!)

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. said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 6:11 pm
Thanx Osvaldo! :P

on Feb. 12 2011 at 3:12 pm
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
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I&#039;m not saying anything, I&#039;m just saying.

That was a good poem. And you are right, it is not right to beat on women.......