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October 26, 2010
By NidaZubair BRONZE, Voorhees, New Jersey
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NidaZubair BRONZE, Voorhees, New Jersey
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"The Heart want what the Heart wants."

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It was cold
But the air was still
Outside is the only place for me
I can be free
In my own world
That rain hitting me
And the hard, cold cement
Pitter patter is all I hear
The sky is blue
Now being covered with
White puffy clouds
Like a blanket on you when
You are sick in bed

© Angela F., Bonham, TX

The author's comments:
My LA teacher really inspired me with this poem. She took our class outside and bam! It hit me.
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