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November 12, 2010
By heyxyoux3 GOLD, Lemont, Illinois
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heyxyoux3 GOLD, Lemont, Illinois
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we'll never have to listen to anyone about anything because its all been done and its all been said.

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i tell myself it is okay
i dont care what you say
to her
i dont care if it was the same
the same words you whipsered to me
the ones i still hold on to
i tell myself you are a waste of time
and yet you stay in my mind
i tell myself all these things
i tell myself all these lies
just like you did
and i believe them all
just like i did before

© Jill H., Pompton Plains, NJ

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This is a beginning, id like critism on it? changes to be made? help? itd be greatly appreciated.
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