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attraction and connection

November 22, 2010
By ieshadanai GOLD, Walnut Grove, Mississippi
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ieshadanai GOLD, Walnut Grove, Mississippi
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I love you as much as you love me. So if you hate me then we're even.

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i saw you nd you saw me
you made my knees feel weak
but i put my head up and looked you in the eye
and said hi
our eyes locked and we smiled
and for a sec it was like we were the only two in the room
i walked on but looked back
and there you were still looking at me
and i felt so happy
it is so obvious how we feel
we have an instant attraction and an awesome connection

© Mary Claire J., Wichita Falls, TX

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