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What I See

November 25, 2010
By XxMiseryxX SILVER, Abilene, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's mind over matter; I don't mind and you don't matter"

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You see a horrible human
I see a real human
One who has faced hardships
but has a strong soul
I see someone I can trust
and someone I can look up to
I see a person who should live
to prove everyone who thought
you wouldn't make it wrong
thats what I see
How long until you see it too?

© Ricky P., Natchitoches, LA

The author's comments:
This is written about suicide. Many of my friends talk about suicide, and one day, one of them said "I don't know what you see in me" So..I wrote this.
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