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Things Dearly Missed

November 26, 2010
By AudrianaB BRONZE, Brookhaven, Mississippi
AudrianaB BRONZE, Brookhaven, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself, it's about creating yourself.


A midnight call,
A secret letter,
Your soothing voice,
That made things better.

Your thick, dark hair.
The way you smile.
The soft, sweet kiss,
That made the day worthwhile.

Your silk-like laugh,
Such warming skin.
And those protective arms,
That always drew me in.

Your eyes that shined,
With a light from above.
Oh, that brilliant green,
That made me fall in love.

With the lips of an angel,
And the grace of a dove.
To know you was to love you,
And that's just the way it was.

The smile that brings warmth,
To the cold winter nights,
And in the darkest hours,
Brings forth a light.

With fingertips of velvet,
That soothed where they touched-
That gave me childish butterflies,
And a feverish blush.

So many things,
I miss about you;
The things you'd say,
The things you'd do.

To list them all,
Would take a lifetime,
But the thing I miss the most,
Is that you were mine.


The author's comments:
Let's just say, ex boyfriend's are my inspiration. So if I keep breaking up, I'll keep writing. Who said break-ups were a bad thing? ;)

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on Apr. 15 2011 at 2:22 pm
AudrianaB BRONZE, Brookhaven, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself, it's about creating yourself.

I try to have a positive outlook, after awhile, dark and depressing poems get old to me. I have a few sad ones, but over all, they're mainly positive.

on Apr. 12 2011 at 9:22 am
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

what i like most is how you took something that's typically negative, and made a good poem of it. I applaud you. :)

on Jan. 6 2011 at 2:56 pm
AudrianaB BRONZE, Brookhaven, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself, it's about creating yourself.

Yes; they surely can! and thank you very much. I have tonsss more to put on here! Be sure to rate them all and comment to tell me what you think. Please and thank you :)

Marley11 said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 11:46 am
Marley11, Little Whinging, Other
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:) I agree, good things can come from break-ups (like your poems!) I mean just look at Taylor Swift. I wouldn't wish for anyone to break-up but I hope you write more poems because i really liked this one.