if i... would you... | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. if i... would you...

if i... would you...

February 7, 2011
By abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
More by this author
abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
yesterday is behind you tomorrow will be a gift and today live like its your last day

View profile

if i was to die
would you ever miss me
if i was to never breath again
would you breath for me
if i cut myself here
would you help me stop the bleeding
if i turned blue
would you try to save me
if i took my life
would you feel sorry for me
if i was to die
would you ever miss me

The author's comments:
this was about an ex of mine, i felt that i was used and wanted to write something darker then normal.i hope you all like it.
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Brother
By Anonymous
Poetry
Lightning
By Rachel Bellah BRONZE
Seattle, Washington
Rachel Bellah BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
Summer Day
By Lost-In-Life GOLD
Whitby, Other
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

View profile
Poetry
cry
By carreyelaine GOLD
Arlington, Tennessee
carreyelaine GOLD, Arlington, Tennessee
12 articles 4 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
unnamed
By Mew13 SILVER
Princeton, New Jersey
Mew13 SILVER, Princeton, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If there were to be a universal sound depicting peace, I would surly vote for the purr.&quot;<br /> (Barbara L. Diamond)

View profile
Poetry
Carry On
By BreLee SILVER
Sula, Montana
BreLee SILVER, Sula, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.

abby_lynn BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 4:56 pm
abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
yesterday is behind you tomorrow will be a gift and today live like its your last day

View profile
awe thank you guys and nice that you that you found me dark_kilala
Kilala_Dark_1 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2011 at 9:02 am
Kilala_Dark_1 BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;As she looks down upon a shattered youth.<br /> A shattered mirror shows a shattered truth.&quot;

View profile
I WOULD! :)
Kimmy_Kerosene BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 4:18 pm
Kimmy_Kerosene BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forever Changeing &amp; Always Becoming

View profile
I can TOTALLY relate to this...I love it