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Time In A Bottle

February 9, 2011
By Ramie BRONZE, Lorenzo, Texas
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Ramie BRONZE, Lorenzo, Texas
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"Babe my watch doesn't tell time forwards, it goes backwards to the first time I said I love you." by. someone special

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time is like a bottle
contained with just a cap
you don't know whats all in it
until you hear a spat
and when your time is all used up
you know its not too late
to go and buy another one
to at least defy our fate

© Gizelle S., Miami, FL

The author's comments:
i saw my watch today and noticed it was dead, it made me think "well you can buy batteries, but you never know when they are going to die again!" I'm not sure why i chose a bottle instead of batteries though, HA, maybe its just easier to rhyme with
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