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I Weep

February 14, 2011
By FantasyTruth BRONZE, South Bend, Indiana
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I weep.
The tears run down my face
My soul hits rock bottom
The earth spins around me
Through the curtains, through the window
The light shines in then
Touching my heart
I think, how could I have been so stupid?
The sadness strikes me and
I weep.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

The author's comments:
This one was one I wrote during school while I was watching the rain fall outside. The rain reminded me of tears, giving me the idea.
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TrulyRosa BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:58 pm
TrulyRosa BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
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&quot;Play the wrong note and we&#039;ll all b[e] flat.&quot;

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I really love this - you really hooked me in.