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Stuck in Perfect

February 10, 2011
By IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.


A spinal cord straight through
A hip bone poked out or two
Perfect
The ribs are countable
A heart that's unstable
Perfect
An empty stomach
Tongue free from any lick
Perfect
Breasts sucked in
Not fat, only thin
Perfect
Heart always monitored
Can't stand without seeing stars
Mom's crying
Breath dying
Tube pumping food
Only a bad mood



.......Perfect?



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IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on May. 26 2011 at 2:51 pm
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

Thank you so much! It's really good to hear you say that. I find it really amazing that peopel are actually reading my writing but hearing things like that just about make my month.

on May. 22 2011 at 8:03 pm
RainWashed PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
46 articles 1 photo 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Repeat the good and the bad. Do it all again. And pile on the years."

 This was great! I think that is completely new way to look at your body! You are such a great writer! I completely admire you!