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A Train Ride

February 15, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments

I met you on the train,
heading downtown,
I remember the day was full of rain,
and I never thought I'd see you frown,

you smiled so wide,
your eyes ice blue,
I laughed so hard I cried,
but time flew,

it was a short ride,
and we filled it with chat,
but, we had to say our good-byes,
and I didn't see you after that.


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on Apr. 1 2011 at 7:20 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thanks! :)

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on Apr. 1 2011 at 6:44 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

nice poem! it was short, but sweet. keep up the good work!

on Mar. 24 2011 at 5:25 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you so much!

on Mar. 24 2011 at 4:27 pm
Paige101 BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It was the first time we ever played in Illinois, yet the 50-60 kids there were singing along to our tunes like they&rsquo;d been fans all their lives.&quot; -A Day To Remember

Your work is so amazing. I can't help but love it.

on Mar. 21 2011 at 3:50 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thanks! :D

on Mar. 21 2011 at 12:53 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Wow, amazing! I loved everything about this piece starting with the rythum all the way to the story behind the words! Nice job.