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February 27, 2011
By Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

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You go to school and act like every things cool
When you get home you fall apart
Into the pain and suffering
Into the black hole
Where nothing can help you
You refused to be helped
What’s the point now?
You asked yourself
Why try?
But you know you just want things to be right
The way they’re supposed to be:
No fights, no getting abused
Just a nice place, it’s not coming to you
You have to find it

© Tiffany D., Philadelphia, PA

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HaleyDRog. GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2011 at 11:46 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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This was a very impressive piece. It is relatable, which makes it that much greater!
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 2:14 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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&quot;I&#039;m living in a shell with no soul&quot; -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)<br /> &quot;Time still turns the pages of the book it&#039;s burned&quot; -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

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You're welcome!!!!!! :))
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:11 am
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Thanks very much!!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2011 at 10:21 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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:)))) impressiveeee (: Great job!! this is awesome
Basketball23 SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2011 at 8:16 pm
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OOOH!!!  I love this!!!!!  I love it how he's acting to be all mellow and stuff and then everything falls apart.  And the part where he has to find it...GENIOUS!!!!!