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March 28, 2011
By and4aslan GOLD, Livonia, Michigan
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and4aslan GOLD, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Close your eyes, and keep your mind wide open&quot; -Bridge to Terabithia<br /> &quot;If I&#039;ve learned anything, it&#039;s that my mascara isn&#039;t waterproof.&quot; -Sammie Jameston (Mascara Isn&#039;t Waterproof)<br /> &quot;When I say I love you. You say you don&#039;t deserve it. When I say I need you . You say I deserve someone better, When I say my life is better with you. You say I don&#039;t know any better. But when I kiss you, you say I love you, When I have to go, you say I need you. When I am with you, you know, that there is no better feeling then our love coming together and that is something we both deserve.&quot;

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A single star in the sky will show all truth
I fully belong to you
My heart has found it's love in your caring eyes
Being held in your strong arms
I may never fall again

When my tears fall on the page, they disappear
All I can see is your words; stained in ink
In your eyes, there has never been anyone so beautiful
No on can ever take the feeling I have towards you
For you say love only happens once

The whole of my day is spent thinking about you
People doubt out love; however, I do not
Life was given with hardships
It would not be as exciting if it didn't
For, we will make it through anything

Words can not express any feeling that comes to me when I see you
My eyes light up in excitement
A mile a minute, my heart does beat
The biggest smile comes across my face
I can barely breathe

Someday I will be able to call you my own forever
I will be granted the ability to pour all my love out to you
Prove that I have never have had such a passion about anyone or anything
As long as my heart beats, I will love you
Forever, may I stay yours

© Lauren R., Edmond, OK

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and4aslan GOLD said...
on May. 25 2011 at 11:21 am
and4aslan GOLD, Livonia, Michigan
13 articles 21 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Close your eyes, and keep your mind wide open&quot; -Bridge to Terabithia<br /> &quot;If I&#039;ve learned anything, it&#039;s that my mascara isn&#039;t waterproof.&quot; -Sammie Jameston (Mascara Isn&#039;t Waterproof)<br /> &quot;When I say I love you. You say you don&#039;t deserve it. When I say I need you . You say I deserve someone better, When I say my life is better with you. You say I don&#039;t know any better. But when I kiss you, you say I love you, When I have to go, you say I need you. When I am with you, you know, that there is no better feeling then our love coming together and that is something we both deserve.&quot;

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Thank you so much!!
gleek1234 GOLD said...
on May. 25 2011 at 7:30 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

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this is a really good poem i hope you and your lover are together forever. when i was reading the poem i almost felt as if i knew you. like you your telling this story to me and i was listoning. GREAT JOB!!! KEEP IT UP!!!! ur amazing.
and4aslan GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 3:45 pm
and4aslan GOLD, Livonia, Michigan
13 articles 21 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Close your eyes, and keep your mind wide open&quot; -Bridge to Terabithia<br /> &quot;If I&#039;ve learned anything, it&#039;s that my mascara isn&#039;t waterproof.&quot; -Sammie Jameston (Mascara Isn&#039;t Waterproof)<br /> &quot;When I say I love you. You say you don&#039;t deserve it. When I say I need you . You say I deserve someone better, When I say my life is better with you. You say I don&#039;t know any better. But when I kiss you, you say I love you, When I have to go, you say I need you. When I am with you, you know, that there is no better feeling then our love coming together and that is something we both deserve.&quot;

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Thank you so much!! I was trying to get a lot of emotion out in it. But no amount of words can describe some things. Haha. Thanks for your encouragement! (:
mickey...! said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 3:43 pm
This is an amazing poem! i love it. it really shows your emotion. you have a great tallent! keep writing!