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Please, Don't leave

April 22, 2011
By HeyItsAshley GOLD, Hanover, Pennsylvania
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HeyItsAshley GOLD, Hanover, Pennsylvania
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The door is wide open
And your stuff is packed
your moving around with cation
holding your feelings back
the wind whirls around my hair
while i drop to my knees
i gave you everything
i gave you me
my heart is pounding
and you look at me with brown eyes
no one dares to speak
i just choke back my screams
could i have changed this?
was it you or me?
You walked out just a step
looking in the distance
with a blank stare
i whisper the only thing i could
please, Don't leave
you closed the door.
you

© Bianca A., Damascus, MD

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the feeling you know someone is breaking up with you, and they already set their mind on doing so.
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