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Water
June 18, 2011
Water
Water brings a joy and peace
Yet it can also bring us death
Water is an earthly wonder
Which brings me closer to myself
As a stare in the water and see my reflection
It reminds me of the person I'm suppose to be
Water can be a lover or a hater
Which can help solve problems much later
The beauty of water is amazing
as it makes my problems go dazing.
© Lindsey W., Woodinville, WA
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Subliminalpoet BRONZE said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 6:00 pm
I like the poem's start because it has a solemn and reflective tone about the natural capabalities of water. I then begin to see you peer into yourself by introducing the word "reflection." I love the end how you say your problems go dazing as if to say they sleep. That was genius
dreamingwitheyesopen said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 1:23 pm
LOVED IT. It was really good! :) :)
BandNerd16 said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 1:03 pm
Lol that is a coinencedence. and ill read it and rate it
BandNerd16 said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 1:02 pm
Thank you so much i appriecate your comment and that your found it enjoyable
youaretheinkandlifeisthepaper BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 12:02 pm
Def liked it! Very interesting :)
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 12:27 am
I like it. I like how it's almost personification, but not quite. Could you look at my stuff? I have one peice called "The Water" (weird coincidince, huh?).
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