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Or Love Me Not

June 24, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Love me,
or love me not,
I don't know what's going on,
and you're just sitting there,
looking back at me,
with pity in your eyes.

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Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 8:30 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thank you!
Rissa02 SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 8:18 pm
Rissa02 SILVER, California, Other
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"you're just sitting there, looking back at me, with pity in your eyes" Best lines! I love the emotion radiating from this.
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:40 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

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I hate it when someone pities me. It makes me feel weak. But I would like it if they would show action with it :)
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:31 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thanks! :D
austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:42 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

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Pity can be one of the worst things someone can give you, especially in regards to relationships.  I can imagine this in my mind- again, I love the simplicity!