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The Same Sky
June 26, 2011
Somewhere,
in a different city,
I'm sitting,
under a midnight sky,
watching the cars drive by,
and you're where you should be,
looking at the same sky as me.
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Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 9:25 pm
Thank you!
callmebaddog SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:05 pm
I read this a few times, it's not loaded with a lot of words. It still holds a bit of meaning though :)!
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:54 pm
Thanks! :)
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:54 pm
Thanks for the comment and advice. :)
Very good!
I'm not sure why you broke the stanzas up like you did. If it was for emphasis, how about you add a period after "by," and capitalize "and"?
Also, I would suggest "just where" and "looking up." I think it places a tad more emphasis, and the extra syllables help to close it out. Honesty, the first time I read it, I added those words subconsciously.
Keep it up!
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 10:27 am
I like the idea, its a nice thought. [:
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:38 am
It's called Destiny :)
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:33 am
Thanks! :D
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:04 am
Very good. Well written.
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:48 pm
Thanks! :)
thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:42 pm
I love this. I often think the same exact thing. How everyone is different, yet we gaze at the same moon every night. It makes you feel a connection with every person on all continents of the Earth. It's a beautiful thing. What would happen if our world were like other planets that had several moons, and people in different parts of the world looked at a different moon? That would be weird! Just a thought! Good job!
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:07 pm
I feel this way too about a certain someone. Only thing is, we don't live in the same city! (That's going to change, though!)
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:26 pm
Thank you! Sure, I'll check yours out.
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:25 pm
Thanks! :)
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