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Poison

July 12, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments

Lying is a poison,
floating in the air.
It settles in our veins,
and corrupts everything.
It is a plague,
and everyone's diseased.


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on Aug. 13 2011 at 8:47 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you!

leafy said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 7:22 pm
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: I hate it.&nbsp;<br /> Gil: You haven&#039;t even read it yet.&nbsp;<br /> Ernest Hemingway: If it&#039;s bad, I&#039;ll hate it. If it&#039;s good, then I&#039;ll be envious and hate it even more. You don&#039;t want the opinion of another writer.&nbsp;

you really pack the meaning in your words! i love this poem, its really true. keep up the nice work!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:20 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thanks! :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:20 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you!

ams98 said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 7:59 pm
ams98, Brighton, Michigan
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I LOVE IT!! Great job:)))

WiseGirl said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 7:18 pm
WiseGirl, Adams, Tennessee
0 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I think, therefore I am.&quot;<br /> -Rene Decartes

I love it! Very good!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:55 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you very much!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:55 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 10:29 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments
I like the meaning, and how it's short but sends the message.  You're a talented writer[:

on Aug. 1 2011 at 6:54 am
HopelessTurtle BRONZE, ., Other
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s too short to be organized&quot; - Kendall Schmidt

I really love this. So very true :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:40 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thanks! :)

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:36 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

Short but very meaningful. I like poems like this. Yours too :)))

on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:46 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you! :)

on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:46 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you!

on Jul. 27 2011 at 11:39 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

I like this a lot! It is VERY true, indeed. We all catch it sometime or another! :)

on Jul. 27 2011 at 9:22 am
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk&quot; -H.W. Hegel<br /> <br /> &quot;Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic&#039; -Albus Dumbledore

So. True. You captured that well.

on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:10 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

Yep - very true!

Sencere BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:20 am
Sencere BRONZE, Annapolis, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why am I fighting to live, when I&#039;m just living to fight. Why am I trying to see when there ain&#039;t nothing in sight. Why am I trying to give when no one gives me a try. Why am I dying to live, when I&#039;m just living to die.

That is so true

on Jul. 17 2011 at 12:38 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you!

on Jul. 16 2011 at 11:09 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend.&quot;

I absolutely love it.