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True Colors

July 2, 2011
By Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
12 articles 2 photos 122 comments

The world is a stage
Shakespeare said
He was correct
To an extent—
The world is staged
Your true colors
Contained within
Inhumane bounds
The brush dips into the paint
Dances across the bare canvas
Seems so free, free to be
The artist you wished to be
Yet the edges of the canvas
Contain you
Your true colors
Still waiting to be revealed
Subject to criticism
I found that, the hard way
I saw the doom
Of the human race
Arguing over insignificant disagreements
Such trivial things!
We were fools—
Or so I thought,
And then came the
‘Good Samaritan’ that
The man saw, you know when
When I was in trouble
When my life seemed to be
Well
Slipping away, out of my hands
In both ways
And I had no control
No power over who I was
There are many
You must see
Many Good Samaritans when you
Need them
And I found that
The edge of the canvas
Is not
The edge of hope
The edge of the world
The end of hope, the world
So when in doubt
Look about, I say
Look about for the good in
Humanity
If you search with enough heart
You will find that good
If you look
In yourself
For those true colors…
When is your imagination
Your only restraint?
I looked to the world
Spherical, yet boundless
How we have swept our paintbrush
Across it
Good and bad
And I find no doubt
Left in my mind
That these colors we have,
Inborn and unstoppable,
Are not left to the jurisdiction
Of our fellows
But to ourselves
Our true colors
And so the answer to that
Well
Is to be decided
By you

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem while in the process of writing a similar story of the same title, and suddenly found myself unable to fully express my feelings about this topic within the limits of the storyline. Thus the poem! I hope you enjoy the idea as much as I did.

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on Jul. 19 2011 at 10:20 am
Cortney.Lynn GOLD, Hughesville, Pennsylvania
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I love it(: Its super good!(:

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:38 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

Love the word choice in this! :) I would so appreciate your feedback on one of my poems--A Writer's Journey. 

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:36 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend.&quot;

WOAH. Amazing, it flowed very very well and made me think about it afterwards; its words ringing in my mind.

on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:52 am
purplequeen BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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This poem is well written and wonderful. (:

on Jul. 16 2011 at 5:49 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
12 articles 2 photos 122 comments

Question:

Does this poem flow well?


on Jul. 15 2011 at 8:12 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
12 articles 2 photos 122 comments
Yay!.........

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on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:39 pm
TAR11 SILVER, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
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I like the use of imagery.  Please check out my poems From the Hilltop and Anonymous' Inferno.  Thanks! 

on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:00 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
12 articles 2 photos 122 comments

PLEASE comment on this

Tell me if I sound stupid, I don't care. I am in desperate need of review and criticism.