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July 25, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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It is what it is

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Supermans out fighting crime Batmans still not far behind Spiderman is doing the same Joker locked up in prison chains pinnochios still made of wood on the traintracks is The Little Engine That Could in the woods you'll see Red Riding Hood now every things all nice and good.

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I have to have somthing funny to get over sometimes and this piece is one of my LOL pieces.
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austenite GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:44 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

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I liked this poem - especially the humorous yet slightly satirical/mocking tone directed at what is inherently "good/evil" in the world. Great job!
Kai17 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 8:47 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 339 comments

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*beepbeep* <br /> &quot;Where to, Miss?&quot; <br /> &quot;To the stars.&quot;

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I agree with JoPepper; your poems are really good, but the formatting is a little confusing....
Dark_Mind GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 11:18 am
Dark_Mind GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
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&quot;Sounds like a Personal Problem.&quot;

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This is really good, very humorous, I loved it.
JoPepper PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 4:04 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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&quot;Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Not all those who wander are lost&quot; --JRR Tolkien<br /> <br /> &quot;When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears.&quot; --Jose&#039; Bergamin

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I love this only thing that needs fixing is the formatting.  But I love your poems, they have such a great rythem.  Keep it up!!!!! ;D
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM said...
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Everything is so peaceful and good. Great!!!!!!!
marissa87 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 2:52 pm
marissa87 BRONZE, Glenmoore, Pennsylvania
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what is popular is not always right and what is right is not always popular

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i like this one alot! i admire people who can write about the happy things in life. i think we need more people like you who can do that. I cant. I think it is soo creative!

 

TwasBrilling BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:54 pm
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&quot;The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk&quot; -H.W. Hegel<br /> <br /> &quot;Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic&#039; -Albus Dumbledore

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Sometimes poems in this format are hard to read, but it was very clever to link all of the different stories.
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:46 pm
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I like it! Good job! :)
wasps said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 2:00 pm
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Ha ha ha, yes, very LOL :)

Just next time, you should put like each saying (you know ... like .... oh, i cant think of the word, but you know what i mean :D) on different lines :)