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"Abstract"

May 4, 2011
By 1dan305 SILVER, Florida City, Florida
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1dan305 SILVER, Florida City, Florida
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"Today, I realized that all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration — that we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively. There is no such thing as death; life is only a dream, and we are the imagination of ourselves"

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Yang walks in Yins studio of revelations.
Shocked by what he saw,
A masterpiece of the sublime.
Yang sees she painted all the walls,
She splattered bold color on her canvas walls.
This true Pollock, I’m lost in her abstract,
And I see her brush, still in hand.
The paint’s still wet
Yang drops down to his knees,
Still in awe.
Yang wishes to have Yin’s…
Artistic mind.
To actually finish what one started...

© Halle G., Baltiz, OH

The author's comments:
this is about a dream i had and i use painting as a metaphor for what i really saw in my dream...
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