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Widow's Dream
July 31, 2011
Lovely is the dream
What the widow dreamt
Lovely is the illusion
What the widow cries for
Lovely is her pat
What she lost
Lovely are her tears
That she cries without pause
Lovely was her heart
That is now black with sin
Lovely was her smile
Which is eternally broken
Lovely is the dream
That she dreamt
Lovely is the time
Where she didn't cry
© Jeanette M., Phoenix, AZ
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xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 9:45 pm
No prob I found it to be astoundingly interesting ;)
Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:49 pm
Ah . . . Sure. Fine. What ever. lol ^^ I actually think it is quite hilarious.
And thank you for cemmenting on my "Totoro" article. ^^
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:38 pm
Yes yes I am is that okay lol
Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2011 at 5:20 pm
Fox, It seams like almost every time you reply to my comments you say "Studio Ghibli!!" lol
haha. Are you just going to call me that? ^^
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 3:14 pm
Thanks Tanki :) ^^ THank you all lol if you want something Riddle-like then read My Dying Pain
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 7:26 pm
Besides the morbidness [sic] of this poem , I enjoyed reading it. It flowed well and there were no spelling/punctation errors :)
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 3:14 pm
Studio Ghibli!!! I remeber you!! lol I wrote come=ment on a fourm you were on......^^ THank you!!!! YOu were the first person to comment on this so thank you!!
Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 12:24 pm
Wow. Pretty. It sounds kind of sad, though. But I guess widows are pretty much sad one way or another. :( This is a nice poem, though. I likey it ;)
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven
All the 'what' s in the beginning kinda comfused me, they jarred my grammer-sense a bit. (Though I really don't pretend to have an unusually good one.)
I think the way you put it together is really cool.