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I want to eat you up!

September 5, 2011
By ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;So shines a good deed , in a weary world.&quot; -William Shakespeare<br /> &quot;I don&#039;t know...&quot; -Bill Cosby<br /> &quot;STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!&quot; -George Lopez

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Adorable child, I'm going to eat you up because you're just so cute!

Yummy, soft thing I'm going to eat you up because you look so good!

Evil person, I'm going to bite you hard because you've made me mad!

Delicious poem, I'm going to swallow you whole because you're the best poem I've read!

The author's comments:
While near my friend Alysha, I had uttered the words,"Oh, you are just so cute! I just wanna eat you up!" after seeing a baby. She, who had never before heard such a phrase, was appalled. In her opinion this was like saying,"I'm gonna smash a butterfly!" or "I'm gonna kick a puppy!" Therefore inspiring this poem...
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