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My Dying Pain

September 2, 2011
By xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
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xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow&quot; ~The Secret Garden<br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world&quot; ~Ghandi<br /> &quot;Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go...&quot; ~???

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It starts in my head,
The very back,
Its a numb voice,
Its telling me,
things I don't want to hear,
They must be lies,
I just want it to go away,
It doesn't make sense,
Then it takes over my mind,
Screaming the same lie
Over and over
It won't stop
Its a siren in my head
Make it hush
Someone please
Then it steals my eyes
Making them blind to anyone else
I begin to follow
the lies in blindness
Next my hands do it against my will
The write the words I feel
Is it really against my will?
Can I stop if I wanted to?
They finish writing
and it moves on to my feet
Making them walk
To deliver the words
I unwillingly wrote
They reach there destination
Then the screaming voice
Which is my confusion
Takes control of my heart
It beats too loud
I have the lines of the lie burnt into my beating muscle
The words I wrote reach out and touch the source
The source of all my hurt
I wait
For once everything is silent
Waiting for a reply
Will it end my dying pain?

© Lindsay - Elese G., Phoenix, AZ

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This article has 6 comments.

Xena_Zionne GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2014 at 6:48 pm
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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&ldquo;I&#039;m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can&#039;t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don&#039;t deserve me at my best.&rdquo; -Marilyn Monroe

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Hey Fox. :) hope you don't mind me calling you that. Thanks for commenting on my chain poem. it's been up there for a while. You renewed my confidence. This poem reminds me of my Poem HER. it's alonger title but if want to read it just click on my name. I can really feel your emotion and conflict from reading this. It pulled at me a bit. It brought back memories. -Caramel Shades
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on Feb. 5 2014 at 12:11 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

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I really like this porm a lot : 3
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 9:42 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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This seems like it's speaking about words said in haste and anger, though I can't tell if that's what you meant it to be. If that is what it means, I think you did an astounding job in writing it :)
secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 6:19 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

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tis is cool
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 11:28 am
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow&quot; ~The Secret Garden<br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world&quot; ~Ghandi<br /> &quot;Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go...&quot; ~???

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??????????
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 3:14 pm
xXx_Fox_xXx BRONZE, Conbe, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Where a rose is, a thistle can not grow&quot; ~The Secret Garden<br /> &quot;Be the change you wish to see in the world&quot; ~Ghandi<br /> &quot;Every road leads somewhere, its just a matter of where you want to go...&quot; ~???

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:)