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You Were My Everything

September 26, 2011
By teenwriter121293 BRONZE, Westfield, Massachusetts
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teenwriter121293 BRONZE, Westfield, Massachusetts
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&quot;Be optimistic, Be open minded, just let that light shine through you&quot;<br /> <br /> ~Shannon Nicole~ (ORIGINAL)

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Your brown eyes your bright smile..
I thought you'd be around for quite a while..

I never thought I would fall so fast..
I thought our LOVE would really last.

You said "I'll love you with all my heart..
I said " I'll love you with every second that i've got.
You said "Never let me go"
I said "Baby you already know I won't.

It's funny how things change..
Now nothing feels the same...
We spent every day together..
Now we are separated forever..

You had me at hello...
Then we said good-bye
I always ask myself why

You were this one thing
Baby you were My Everything

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I lost the boy I fell in love with
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teenwriter121293 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 28 2011 at 2:52 pm
teenwriter121293 BRONZE, Westfield, Massachusetts
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&quot;Be optimistic, Be open minded, just let that light shine through you&quot;<br /> <br /> ~Shannon Nicole~ (ORIGINAL)

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Yea we broke up because of vicious rumors that he believed over me.  Thankk youuuu :)
ShadowRose SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 5:59 pm
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Very good. (: I love it.
Kev-Girl SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 2:51 pm
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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This is very good, and it reminds me of a poem I wrote called Goodbye For Now. But in my poem, the dude dies, and Im not sure if thats what happens to your guy? Or did you break up, or something? Anyways, this is very good!