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I believed you

September 28, 2011
By livelaughlove96 BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
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"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain."

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I believed what you said,
Because you started to cry,
But now I feel stupid,
What you said was a lie.
But thanks for teaching me,
Now I realize,
Anyone can water,
Their deceiving eyes.

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LenaGoren BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2011 at 9:11 pm
LenaGoren BRONZE, Moreland Hills, Ohio
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&quot;Life is either a daring adventure, or nothing&quot;<br /> -Helen Keller<br /> &quot;You cannot depend on your eyes when your imagination is out of focus&quot;<br /> -Mark Twain

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I really like the ending, I felt it was really powerful, but the only weak part was at the beginning, in the word "because", it interrupts the flow just a little bit, but other than that I really enjoyed this poem.