The writing is very good, but the idea behind it is worth the other 50% of criticism. And i wasnt impressed by it, not to be disrespectful (sometimes i sound harsh, but i prefer passionate). Is fighting for fighting's sake brave? Violence doesn't make someone brave, and standing up for something can be peaceful. Sometimes compromise is needed to ensure a greater evil is not committed... Destruction of lives for no reason, being one. Once again, sorry to debate opinions and not strictly writing, but it seems like you're not afraid of a challenge:) ... In fact, you would probably enjoy it.