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October 16, 2011
By Queen25 PLATINUM, San Antonio, Texas
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Our world was meant to be entirely good,
But we have ruined that,
Our world has been changed,
Violence has broken out,
Our world can only watch.

We are the ones in charge,
We have done poorly in our job,
We have brought destruction upon ourselves,
It is our fault people die fighting,
We have no one to blame but ourselves.

© Ed J., Marblehead, MA

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I wrote this because I was thinking about the war and the poor health of our world. please, comment and vote on this piece and my other work.,
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