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On a Summer's Day
October 17, 2011
On a summer’s day,
The wind whistles
Freely singing its song.
Atop the waves
While they danced,
For many hours long.
On a summer’s day,
The sun strokes the earth,
Immersed in crystalline sky,
While the clouds float
In a still trance
Without saying goodbye.
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This article has 5 comments.
VandalSpirit DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 4:52 pm
Nice poem! I liked image you created in my mind. :) Keep writing!
Little.Miss said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 3:50 pm
Cute poem. Good grammar, too!
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 3:18 pm
This was beautiful, though one line is in the wrong tense, I think you're writing in the present tense, but "while they danced" is in the past tense. Other than that, I found the imagery powerful, and the flow very flow-y ;) Great work, keep it up, my dear, may your passion for writing take you far.
