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Death of That Love

November 15, 2011
By ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can close your eyes to everything you do not want to see, but you can not close you heart to things you do not want to feel"


The flowers sent hangs in the air
The mother cries
She comes down the alter
In her gown of white

He does not wait for her when she reaches the end
And the guest are dressed all in black
The tears are not those of happiness

The song plays the same
The flowers smell the same
The tears have not changed

He does not wait for her
And that is what kills her

The funeral of her heart proceeds

How close it was to a happily ever after
If only he had awaited her
And he made all the difference

In the death of that love


The author's comments:
how closely is happily ever after to the heart break? no matter what she does it is only he and he makes all the diffrence in the world.

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on Jun. 26 2012 at 1:40 pm
ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can close your eyes to everything you do not want to see, but you can not close you heart to things you do not want to feel"

thanks for the suggestion i appreciete it, and thanks for checking out my work

ReneeB SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2012 at 10:58 pm
ReneeB SILVER, Milford, Michigan
9 articles 2 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The world needs dreamers and the world needs doers. But above all, the world needs dreamers who do.&quot; <br /> ~Sarah Ban Breathnach

That's sad, but nice. It reminded me of the song "Just a Dream" by Carrie Underwood.
It's just my opinion that you shouldn't blatantly say that it's a funeral; the reader can infer that much, so i don't think you need that line about the funeral of her heart - maybe the "procession of my heart" or something? Just a thought :)