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The Moon and The Sun

November 24, 2011
By augustsun02 SILVER, Hamburg, New Jersey
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Write. It doesn't matter if you're overjoyed, furious, miserable, or what. Write to keep those emotions in check while managing to grow stronger.

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All was good, bright, and fun when the moon fell in love with the sun
All was right in late June when the sun fell in love with the moon
Then the moon said goodbye as down came the November rain
With tears in her eyes, the sun vowed to never fall in love again

© Amanda S., Attleboro, MA

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ReneeB SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 1:30 pm
ReneeB SILVER, Milford, Michigan
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&quot;The world needs dreamers and the world needs doers. But above all, the world needs dreamers who do.&quot; <br /> ~Sarah Ban Breathnach

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Very lovely. I love the personification, and the idea of the sun and moon together. Great job! :)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2012 at 6:51 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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That was awesome. I loved it!
KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 12 2012 at 5:45 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
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This is really creative-it's fun and whimsical, I really like it because I'm into astrology! 5/5!
Eshshah PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 12 2012 at 9:44 am
Eshshah PLATINUM, Galloway, New Jersey
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I just wish it were a tad longer... I don't know, it feels like you could add a stanza or two to the front. but I like the flow of it, and especially the ending!
LittleSully GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:53 pm
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This is really great, keep up the good work:)