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the first kiss

November 28, 2011
By TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
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TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
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Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you'll still end up among the star's

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today couldn't be any better
the wind blew just right
the temperature was perfect
and i was with him

his arms around me
my head on his shoulder
our hands intertwined
everything was in the right place

then he moved closer
and i moved closer
he leaned
i leaned

then it happened
his lips felt perfect on mine
soft, smooth, perfect
he was intoxicating

then he pulled away
no this moment couldn't end
but perfect never lasts
it had to end sometime

then time sped up
we got home faster
he left sooner
the moment was gone

he was all i could think
all i could breathe
my life was his now
but so was his mine

we were one now inseparable
was this love i don't know
but you never know the first time
i just prayed it wouldn't be the last

© Jacqueline S., Hanover, MA

The author's comments:
this story is all about the most memroball first kiss that happens to everyone and is different for every one. it is sometimes the start of love but usaually you just think it is
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MissKrissyKat BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 11:51 pm
MissKrissyKat BRONZE, Peebles, Ohio
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I don't need no one's help cause i can bless myself, no one else can help, but me, myself, and I!

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This is really good! I loved it!
Zayyy BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:05 am
Zayyy BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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Awesome!!!! its... amazing
Think4Ever said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 3:54 pm
Think4Ever, Oxford, Alabama
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"We loved with a love that was more than love."

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Vivid and entertaining. Very good.
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:57 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

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Its enticing!!!! I felt it.... Keep up ur writing.. :)
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 4:47 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Wow...

That was good.  The way you wrote it made my heart rate increase, just like it was actually happening.  In other words, (clears throat) "Well done, good and faithful poet!"

xo19brandee93xo SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:34 pm
xo19brandee93xo SILVER, Griswold, Connecticut
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&quot;Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity<br /> To seize everything you ever wanted-One moment<br /> Would you capture it or just let it slip?&quot;

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Really good. I've had the same experience somewhat with a guy i really liked. Keep it up.