"so scared I am/ Adult life is here" Again with the reverse syntax! In "Cloud Nine Blue" It was good but in this and in "Trapped In a Cage" It was awkward. However, bucause the rest of the poem was done so well and because I love the subject of missing childhood and wishing that being a grownup was a little farther away I appreciate this work a little more. It is close to my heart because I have two older bothers who are now, by definition at least, adults who are gone to collage. I can't help but think of when we all were kids playing bike tag, sleding, and playing epic games of hide and seek spread throughout back and front yards of three houses. Now that's something to miss! This poem reminds me that soon what little bit of childhood I have left is near gone. Excellent job. Four stars!

I think you described how everything passes so fast really well... I really like this poem! Keep writing! :)