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Demon's calling
December 6, 2011
constantly being bullied
on the verge of tears
battle after battle
holding them back
burning hatred
on the inside
holding back my demon
bursting from within
no more can i stand it
letting my inner demon out
swearing my vengeance
I'll never rest will I get them all
© Kriztille J., Briarwood, NY
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This article has 5 comments.
PhoenixCrossing GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 6:51 pm
of course it does. everyone's work has pieces of them in it. what i meant to say..well...bluntly: it's generic. try something new. i like reading the same material as much as i like watching reruns- i simply don't. do you get where i'm coming from?
PhoenixCrossing GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 10:00 pm
Hm, I like it but I don't. I like the whole figurative language with the demons and such but I feel as if I've heard it all before. I've heard and read the same kind of figurative language before. Maybe try adding your own unique details to make your work stand out more.
applesauceHater SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:48 pm
title drew me to it. it's nice. something most people can compare as we all try to hold back our demons
