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Just Me

December 4, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

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Days that I feel like I'm nothing,
Want to be something
No one can feel the vibration of my voice from my head to my toes;
Like I do
Secrets in my head
Pain in my legs
You cant hear me
Maybe because you never take the chance to try and look at me
There's something I need
I need to be Understood
If you could
Please Try
try to get what I'm saying
try and get why I'm crying
try and get why I feel like I'm dying
Every time you hit me
Cant you see
I feel more and more Morose
Like I am the Base of this family
I Yield
I'm done
Its done
You say I'm unkempt
I say I'm clean
You say I'm a disappointment
And again I say but you don't seem to hear, I'm a Achiever
Cause 1
All of the things you say to me could have knocked me down
Cause 2
All of the things that you have hit me with could have gotten me not to stay around
3
All of the times you say I'm a Disappointment and no use to you
4
All the times that I still think its True.
And yet I'm still here
Trying to survive.

© Austin K., Studio City, CA

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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 5:07 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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i try to coe from the heart while doing these poems... thank you
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 5:06 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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thank you.. for understanding.. where i was coming from. :)
Luna3952 SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 7:14 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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All is fair in love and war.<br /> Palsm 114<br /> John 3:17

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omg! this is really good! i can so relate to you!
ashlyn939 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:56 pm
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
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&quot;Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don&#039;t, one blink and they might disappear... forever.&quot; -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

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This is really great. Your writing speaks they're not just black and white words on a screen they give you a picture
Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:11 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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&quot;its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all&quot;

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ok... thank you! (for the comment)
SnehaChatterjee PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 7:44 am
SnehaChatterjee PLATINUM, Kolkata, West Bengal, India, Other
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Wonderful poetry.... never give up u'r a true winner!!

I'd be pleased if u comment on my poetry:)

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:28 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Yeah i try to bring my poetry from the heart. And thank u very much!
pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:03 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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LOVE IT. i love how personal it is!