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January 2, 2012
By browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Build me up, tear me down
I can't live with you around
Life of lies and hateful hearts
This is where my journey starts

Broken mirrors, fragile glass
Piercing pieces of the past
All I know has fallen through
And for this, thanks is due to you

So many fears I'm forced to face
And memories I can't erase
Forever, your love I will seek
A promise that you'll never keep

And for this I shall always weep
Not on the surface, but down deep
I'll weep, and weep, and weep,
And weep.

© Sara P., Lake Mary, FL

The author's comments:
My real life moter inspired people me to write this. i just want people to understand that no matter how much I detest her, there is still a part of me that yearns for that motherly love.
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browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 7:07 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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well then my condolences to you dear. :/
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 10:00 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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no problem, anytime...and i know exactly what you mean in this poem..
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:39 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Thanks alice! I wasn't sure anyone would relate but i was hoping that SOMEONE would... :)
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:38 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Thank you so much! This was actually one of my first that I was serious about....
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 2:00 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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this is a poem i an actually relate to. i really felt it. lol but anyway..amazing poem :)
babyrex4 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 6:05 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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This is beautiful! Keep writing poems, you have great sense with words!
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:07 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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I'm sorry that i named my poem the same as yours...I didn't know. I'm glad you like it but even more so am i glad tha you understand. :)
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:05 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Thanks Acastillo!! This was my first poem I ever truly felt I could be somewhat proud of.
Acastillo GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:17 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Just because you have flaws, doesn&#039;t mean you aren&#039;t beautiful ~Zayn Malik

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I really liked this and how it rhymed. Though I cannot say I can relate to this, I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the fantastic work! :)
TapTap SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:12 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Ha! I have a poem called Mother too, but your is WAY better than mine. I love it! I feel this way all the time! You're not alone hun!