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December 28, 2011
By CJN0808 BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Experience, that most brutal of teachers; but you learn, my God do you learn.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> -C.S. Lewis

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O Beautiful, you shine so bright
Like stars, a cold distant night
Reveal to me what I could have lost
But instead, I suffered, I stood and fought
So now, I stand on the edge of the world
A weeping woman, a hurried word
A cold blanket of faraway stars
A calming whirlwind of passing cars
Laying in a field of yellow 
Calming voices, soft and mellow
Having you by my side
Makes me whole, makes me alive 
A tender kiss, a caring hand
Hoping for a future immense and grand

© Alana R., Dallas, OR

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 1:25 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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^that's me
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 7:16 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Oh, and I also think you should name it "My Beautiful". Just an idea.
so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 7:15 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Very descriptive! Beautiful! Great job!

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