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Day to Day.
January 19, 2012
People waking
People stalking
People mocking
People talking
Moving here
Moving there
Travel the streets
Everywhere
The rhythm of love
The feeling of sound
Don't you know
You make my heart pound
© Breanna Lea B., Richmond, VA
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