The Way You Make Me Feel | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. The Way You Make Me Feel

The Way You Make Me Feel

February 15, 2012
By dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
More by this author
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

View profile

When I see you, I want to kiss you
When you leave, all I want to do is be wrapped up in your arms
When you text me “Hey beautiful,” I blush
When you tell me you want to be with me, I get butterflies
When you tell me you want to hug me, I can feel your touch
When we make a plan to hang out, I can go from depressed to happy
in a matter of seconds
When I found out you’re a lesbian, I thanked God, and grew excited
When you asked me out, I felt like I was the luckiest girl on earth
When we played 20 questions I was anxious for your reply
When I told you about my horrible secrets, I was afraid you
wouldn’t like me anymore.

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
The Eternal Sea
By Anonymous
Poetry
Connected
By emolover95 GOLD
Park City, Utah
emolover95 GOLD, Park City, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened."

View profile
Poetry
Motley Crue: I really hear you
By Arbys GOLD
Dobbs Ferry, New York
Arbys GOLD, Dobbs Ferry, New York
15 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.&quot;Edgar Allan Poe<br /> &quot;A dream doesn&#039;t become reality through magic; it takes sweat, determination and hard work. ~Colin Powell&quot; ~ Colin Powell<br /> &quot;Wisdom is not finally tested in the schools, Wisdom <br /> &quot;A poem is never finished, only abandoned.&quot;-Paul Valery

View profile
Poetry
Alice
By Keasbey GOLD
La Habra Heights, California
Keasbey GOLD, La Habra Heights, California
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who&#039;s left me so many times. I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who won&#039;t answer my call.&quot;

View profile
Poetry
Med-O-Lark
By Mew13 SILVER
Princeton, New Jersey
Mew13 SILVER, Princeton, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If there were to be a universal sound depicting peace, I would surly vote for the purr.&quot;<br /> (Barbara L. Diamond)

View profile
Poetry
Me
By Beth Warne BRONZE
Charlton On Otmoor, Other
Beth Warne BRONZE, Charlton On Otmoor, Other
1 article 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.

dancer25 GOLD said...
on May. 24 2012 at 12:01 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hope will never be silent&#039;

View profile
thank you soo much it means alot to me
dancer25 GOLD said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 5:17 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Hope will never be silent&#039;

View profile
well i hope you would lol
hellothereimawkward BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 5:13 pm
hellothereimawkward BRONZE, Lindenhurst, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&quot;There&#039;s daggers in men&#039;s smiles&quot;

View profile
I like this one!
SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 9:01 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 306 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

View profile
Wow great Job! You are an amazing writer! You should publish this poem!:)
Aginger GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 10:37 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?&quot;

View profile
This is a great rendition of a classic love poem. Nice job! I think it would be even better if you added more to the ending as well. I would love it if you could read and give feedback on my poem "Forever." Thank you, and well done!