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February 18, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

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Pulling you down,
Can you surrender it all?
Tears sigh heavily,
As they...darling...
They burn...
Whisper against us,
Chasing the light,
Radiance beckons inside that pale blue sea...
Running towards a seductive illusion...
We are,
I realize...
Only a dream.

But don't let me wake...
Keep my heart still,
As you love me,
And sing once more...
Forever and ever...

You are Imaginary.~

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

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Just thinking back... And this appeared(: <3
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recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:58 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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&quot;These are the times that try men&#039;s souls.&quot; - Thomas Paine.<br /> <br /> &quot;You don&#039;t understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could&#039;ve been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am.&quot; - On the Water Front<br /> <br /> &quot;This is my place of failure.&quot;

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The recurring prevalence of sexual undertones makes me question the sanctity of this relationship. While beautifully worded I found this a bit hard to follow..
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:39 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Written, this one is so amazing, and I totally know what you're writing about :) its fantastic!
_ella_herondale BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 8:16 pm
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I was totally imagining a dream the whole time. Another super awesome poem
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:18 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you(: I don't know why I can't see the beauty of my words...
Rain. SILVER said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 8:11 pm
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You seem to have this technique that not a lot of people have and that's that you're able to portray a lot of imagery and I just really enjoy that about your pieces.
carothesparrow GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 8:12 pm
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thats amazing i really liked it
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 10 2012 at 3:18 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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This is really good. It almost seems like a fuzzy memory. Something that is imagenary. I like it alot, good stuff.
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2012 at 1:24 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Thank you ^^
LoonyLoopyLupin GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 5:34 pm
LoonyLoopyLupin GOLD, Raynham, Massachusetts
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I really like this. It's so delicate and simple, but you still got your point completely across. Amazing job. :)